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Beavcoona to the help.


 * One day Beavcoona was walking to school he is 11 years old and he like to build thing and it is his birthday today and his birthday is on 22/12/12 at 12:00 pm but it is now 8:50 time to lean to day but it not going to be a god day today for him. **


 * Beavcoona best friend is john and they are going to his house at noon. Then they went to go have lunch and john house that is just at the north end of the school they had lunch then they went to play outside in the creek then ban! Then they went see what that ban john house just collapsed. **


 * Then they had to go back to class and they had 10 min ssr then writing a narrative and then had lunch two and they went to see how bad john house was and it was bad the hole house collapsed and john can’t live in then beavcoona said you can live with me in to you get house back then they went back to class then they had inquiry. **


 * Beavcoona had a plan he will build john house for him he went to get his tools for his house that is next to the school and then he went to work first he build the fool then he put the fooling on then build the wall and the calling then he put the gib on the walls and the calling then he went on the roof and the ion on then he put john thing in the house then he got cam to get john and john saw the house and john said did you do this? beavcoona said yes but with help by cam he help my by giving me my thing I need. **

= Music is more important than sport =

I think no that Music is more important than sport Because you get fit playing sport and music you don’t get fit.

I believe that sport is more important than music because in sport you run around and get fit and in sport you can make up new games.

I believe that sport is more important than music because in sport you get play with your’s friends and there are lots of sport to play. in Music you can’t play with your’s friends.

I believe that sport is more important than music because you can pass the ball a round and play games with the ball. You can play with a wall by kicking the ball in to the wall.

I believe that sport is more is more important than music because you can play by you self with the wall and on grass and you can play in with a team that will face a team and that it is in the weekend.

So I say that sport is more important than music. Music you can’t have as much fun as you can have playing sport and music you can not play as a team.